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Topic: story 2 Alice
Alice seem to be in a hurry because she had to finish her writing assignment. She believed that it was good but Som who was her teacher did not agree with her. She asked Som to comment on her writing. Som advised her to change some words which were ambiguous and doubtful. Finally, som pointed out to her that she should write the assignment again.
Posted by pegasusclub
at 12:48 PM EDT